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Today I learn
about how to shave in Tim's presentation. Tim's presentation had clear
directions and the speech was entertaining. I can follow the steps to do the
activity. His speech was fun, He first wet his chin with a wet tissue and then
started shaving his beard with a razor. But he does not have many beards, which
may be difficult for him, but he can still show the details of the shave, and
everyone can see. However, girls do not have beards. This is also the fun
start. Tim showed his sexy legs to everyone and taught them to shave their
legs. That's why I like his speech and I enjoy the process.
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